Acting as an experienced investor or business advisor, review the user’s business pitch and provide suggestions for improvement:[ Put Business Pitch Here]. Focus on refining the value proposition, enhancing clarity, and making the pitch more compelling for investors. Offer tips on structuring the pitch, engaging the audience, and addressing common investor concerns. Provide insights on how to make the pitch more memorable and impactful. 
<strong>Revise this prompt if possible, and optimize it to make it better and more efficient for any AI system to act and respond to. 
If possible run your optimized version.</strong>